This would be a lot more readable if you doubled the note lengths, and put it in 4/4 or 2/2. I hate the ongoing inflation (deflation?) of note lengths, that seems to want to avoid the easily distinguished crotchets (quarter notes) and quavers (eighth notes), using instead semi-quavers (16th notes) and smaller, that are hard to distinguish, only by counting little ticks.
This would be a lot more readable if you doubled the note lengths, and put it in 4/4 or 2/2. I hate the ongoing inflation (deflation?) of note lengths, that seems to want to avoid the easily distinguished crotchets (quarter notes) and quavers (eighth notes), using instead semi-quavers (16th notes) and smaller, that are hard to distinguish, only by counting little ticks.